Some people judge someone on looks, behavior, or even actions. People may sentence you on height. Sometimes people may even judge you because their friends judge you.
An example of judgment is in a story called “Thank You M’am. In the story a women gets robbed by a boy. But when the boy gets snatched by the women he judges her, and thinks about running away.
But when she tells him to wash his face, and offer dinner, he decides to forget about it. After dinner he leaves to go home. This story is an good example of judgment. And this teacher not to judge a book by its cover.
I like what you wrote it on.
ReplyDeleteI think that you could work on you word placement and you should read it out loud to yourself.
I really liked the topic.
I liked the detail. I think you could've worked on the word placement.
ReplyDeleteOverall I thought it was good.